T. Kingfisher’s The Hollow Places

T. Kingfisher’s novel, The Hollow Places, is an exploration of darkness that illuminates our world and ourselves. Grounded in the tradition of horror, Kingfisher tells a plucky tale of survival when faced with the worst possible perils. Her characters are lovable and happily willing to go the wrong way for our pleasure, for which we are greatly grateful.

The Setup: Kara, a recently divorced freelance graphic designer, needs a place to live, someplace affordable. Faced with the prospect of returning to live with her mother, the 34-year-old is relieved when her Uncle Earl offers her a job and a spare room backstage at his Glory to God Museum of Natural Wonders, Curiosities, and Taxidermy of Hog Chapel, NC.

Kara takes the new job by the horns and helps Earl to catalog his questionable collection. She even makes a friend, Simon, the gay barista from the coffee shop next door. Her uncle decides to take care of a much-postponed back surgery, leaving Kara to mind the store. The fun begins when she discovers a hole is punched in the wall. She and Simon try to repair it, but a sublime darkness slips through. What else can they do but go investigate?

The Characters:

Kara: What makes Kara most endearing to me are her foibles, like how she cyberstalks her ex, which is disturbing, but also so very sad. Her most vital trait, though is that all-important horror story impulse for a character to go just exactly where they shouldn’t. Kara has this cool feature in abundance, and the reader is served a banquet of terror with a flourish.

The story is told through Kara’s frank, somewhat confessional voice. The psychic distance between the reader and the storyteller appears to be very slim indeed, but Kara demonstrates enough intelligence the reader might suspect critical portions are being withheld. The story asks for us to accept Kara’s forced acceptance of the impossible, of which the possibility she tongue-in-cheek lambasts her Uncle Earl for entertaining. In any case, T. Kingfisher has crafted a likeable character with metaphorical warts, and the reader’s response is near-automatic: We must cheer for her.

Simon: A very likeable gay man, the barista next door is Kara’s perfect cohort. He is such a good friend that he offers to kill Kara’s ex-husband. To which she responds, “You’re sweet to offer.” Simon believes he consumed his twin in the womb, that his left eye is actually her left eye. Ninja tip: If you intend to explore the sublime territory of willows and bunkers where shadowy monsters lurk and creep, choose someone like Simon who will entertain outrageous possibilities. Together they are smart enough to mark the only bunker that takes them back home with a stick.

Uncle Earl: Another supporting character with a critical role, Kara’s uncle is a point of quirky stability. Besides his devotion to Kara, his most endearing feature is a fervent belief in a wide degree of systems, which is unconventionally open to thoughtful consideration, a rarity in any time and beyond virtue now. Uncle Earl is thoughtful too. To make Kara feel right at home, he hangs these antlers above her bed:

Tone:

One of the great delights of the story is how it draws from horror story tradition. An example is the introductory description of Simon:

“He looked exactly the same now as he had the last time I had been here, five years ago, and exactly the same as he had when I’d first met him, nearly a decade ago. Simon had to be nearly forty, if not older, but he looked about eighteen. Somewhere, a portrait was probably aging for him.”

Kingfisher’s narrator casually references Dorian Gray. There are tons of genre references throughout the story, including, of course, the willows themselves. The author addresses this in her notes:

H. P. Lovecraft wrote that “The Willows” by Algernon Blackwood was one of the most terrifying stories ever written. Before I read it, I assumed that this probably meant some people in it weren’t white, and I began it preparing to roll my eyes a bit. But “The Willows” is a genuinely disquieting story, for all the occasional excesses of the prose. Some lines stick with you—“the frontier of another world, an alien world, a world tenanted by willows only and the souls of willows.” Frequently, a line from a story that sticks with me is what eventually spawns a book. My first horror novel, The Twisted Ones, was derived from the line in Arthur Machen’s “White People”: “And I twisted myself about like the twisted ones.” That line stuck in my head, and eventually I had to write a book to unstick it. With The Hollow Places, I found myself thinking about this alien world, tenanted only by willows, and by strange alien forces that seek to change humans, who make funnel shapes in the sand and who are attracted by human thought… … and by otters and corpses and boatmen and a number of other elements. It seemed like an interesting place. Not a good place, but an interesting one. — (from Author’s Notes at the end of the novel)

The Hollow Places woman links a willow's roots with its trunk and branches.
The Hollow Places Draws Its Force From Horror Tradition and Radiates Forward

For anyone who has read Blackwood’s novelette, “The Willows,” that casual reference of the otter is enough to provoke a chill. Blackwood paints a land of horror, one where willows “were interlaced one with another, making a great column… their limbs and huge bodies melting in and out of each other, forming this serpentine line that bent and swayed and twisted spirally with the contortions of the wind-tossed trees…. nude, fluid shapes, passing up the bushes, within the leaves almost — rising up in a living column into the heavens.” T. Kingfisher manages to draw from this heritage and reinterpret it through her characters. Along the way we are treated to scenes like this:

This is downright scary, but throughout the characters maintain a level of humor that is both truly mad and entirely admirable. The reader will experience paragraphs of likely doom will provoke guilty laughter, often at Kara and Simon’s expense. Well I did anyway, but let’s be real about this: they had innumerable opportunities to turn around. I can’t feel guilty about schadenfreude this time.

The combination of the wit of the narrative voice, the humor, and T. Kingfisher’s writing chops that transform nightmares into a compelling reality of danger and delight all make The Hollow Places a feast for the horror aficionado, but this novel is also a portal fantasy. Its self-awareness is reflected in the fact that Narnia is mentioned 17 times by name.

So there you have it: Funny, likeable, queer-positive characters placed in an environment of absolute horror of the finest tradition. The Hollow Places is pure joy. T. Kingfisher is the pen name of Ursula Vernon, who is also an advocate for aspiring writers.

Like the first novel reviewed in this column, Stephen Graham Jones’s The Only Good Indians, one reason I read The Hollow Places was to research it as a possible Hugo nominee. I feel the portal fantasy aspects of the story justified its consideration. While I did not eventually nominate T. Kingfisher’s novel for the Hugo Award, I discovered a story I love and a wonderful author, which is the real payoff for doing this every year.

The Matter of Books: Jones’s The Only Good Indians

The Matter of Books: Jones’s The Only Good Indians

Stephen Graham Jones’s The Only Good Indians is a terrifying horror fantasy with supernatural elements. It is also an #OwnVoices story about modern indigenous people of North America, in this case, the Blackfeet. Most of all, though, it is a tale of friendships and entanglements, as well as the cost of made mistakes and how they can return to haunt us and hurt those we love.

The Only Good Indians by Stephen Graham Jones

This last effect is most clearly pronounced in the story of Denorah, daughter of Gabe, one of the four youths who committed the grave ill that sparked the revenge of Elk Head Woman, a villain with a wide lane for reader empathy. Denorah’s moment of test comes on a basketball court in a match with Shaney, a stranger Denorah meets after being dropped off by her mother outside the place her father is staying. Denorah is there to collect 40 dollars from her father, but nobody is home but the stranger who challenges Denorah one-on-one for a game to 21.

Jones’s scene succeeds so well because of how he mines court discourse and captures the intensity of competition, narrating their moves in fierce language that is both immediate and passionate. The story is told through the eyes of Denorah, who takes pride in her basketball, which appropriately is also a key link she has with her father. In Jones’s hands this game is an effective storytelling device, because as both players draw deeper to perform in their death match, they reveal more of their characters, especially Denorah’s courage, and finally Shaney’s real identity.

Before getting to the match, it’s instructive to consider Denorah’s perspective on the court itself: “the kind… where if you don’t slash in from the baseline for a layup, then where you come down, it’s into a rake of creosote splinters.” The backboard is “rotting-away,” and it’s “nailed flush to a tribal utility pole.” The players are not equal. Shaney is older, six inches taller. This does not bother Denorah, because at first she sees the stranger as a tall human girl, and “tall girls get trained on boxing out, on rebounding, on posting up and setting screens, using their hips and elbows. All of which a team needs to win, for sure. None of which are much use one-on-one, which is a game of slashing, of stopping and popping.”

This same level of deep study describes each play with the verve of a hoops junky. Early on, when Denorah does not know what’s on the line in the game, still playing like a normal match, Shaney moves to score on her:

Shaney dribbles once, high by her right hip, and then turns around, giving Denorah her ass, backing her down already, which is what you do when you have a size advantage.

When you’re on the wrong end of that size game, though, then you can time it out, stab an arm in, slap the ball away.

Denorah gives ground like she’s falling for this, then, the next time Shaney goes for a bounce-against, the round of her back to Denorah’s chest, Denorah steps back—pulling the chair out, Coach calls it—comes around with her right hand, reaching in for that blur of orange leather.

Except Shaney wasn’t backing her down. She was baiting the trap.

What she does now is peel around the other way, her long legs giving her what feels like an illegal first step, and by the time she’s done with that step, throwing the ball ahead of her in a dribble she’ll have to chase down, Denorah’s already out of position, can just watch.

She’s never been spun on like this.

It’s brilliant, riveting text, and it connects. You can feel the play. After a period of reflection, a time Denorah spends normalizing the game, the narration picks up again later in the game. It’s a close one, 15-15 when Denorah digs deeper and turns it on:

Denorah lets her feet leave the ground, still exploding forward under Shaney’s wingspan, and she teardrops the ball up and over, in, just enough soft touch, because this bullshit plywood backboard isn’t trustworthy, not for someone who hasn’t killed a thousand sundowns out here, the clock always ticking its last three seconds down.

“Cheap …” Shaney calls out, just generally.

Jones, at this point, gives Denorah the perception of how she is playing a game for the entire tribe, how dribbles shake the mountains, and the ball “arced up into the sky [and] merg[ed] with the sun, so that when it came down it was a comet almost, cutting through that orange circle of a rim.” Beautiful, poetic language, but its purpose is not to impress with awe but to be the source Denorah needs in her moment of desperation, that fount from which she can draw the courage to tell Shaney, “You don’t win today.”

Denorah has gone on a 3-0 streak when Shaney blocks her. Denorah, confident now, “gets the step” (because “you can always get the step, if you want it bad enough”), drives and flips the ball “up the last possible moment” but Shaney is there. “She doesn’t just slap it down, either, she smothers it, she collects it, she wraps around it like a fullback, falls hard enough back into the pole [ed: the tribal pole]… rotted wood from the backboard rains down over her.”

I mentioned nonchalantly before that this is a horror story. It is, and while Jones does gore quite well, his keenest weapon is pure psychological horror, and this plays out especially well in this scene, because at first Denorah does not know the extent of her danger. The sublime element sof the story are reminiscent of one of my favorite horror novels, King’s It, which is also at its core a story of how friends are changed by events of the past, those that linger. In the case of Jones’s four unfortunate friends, their murder of a pregnant elk ten years before persists, because the victim is not done. Denorah, to her credit, does comment on the injustice of paying for her father’s sin, but Shaney explains with chilly calm, “You’re his calf.” That this might not be a normal game of hoops is apparent in how Shaney is bleeding and her eyes aren’t right, “They’re different. They’re yellowy now, with hazel striations radiating out from the deep black hole of a pupil… too big for her face now.”

The narration of Denorah’s score of nineteen is my favorite, her “move that’ll break the heart of any defender,” as well as “the very last arrow in her quiver.” She executes with aplomb but Denorah goes too far, gets pinned under the basket, and needs to improvise, “her only hope, …to extend the ball as far from her body as possible now, around Shaney’s side where any defender would least expect it, meaning Denorah’s one-handing it now, has just enough grip to spin it up, kiss it soft off the other side of the board, and then she’s falling away, is falling for miles, back into legend.”

Reservation basketball is not always just a game.

While this epic scene plays, however, the stakes of the game are changing. Denorah, as our eyes, picks up on the clues, and her discovery is ours, but her courage when confronted by the knowledge of an assault by an entity beyond death’s door is refreshingly unconventional. And though she sees herself fighting for her tribe, she is also fighting for all of us, everyone who believes in her just cause, and Jones guarantees that we fight beside her. We are also her tribe. It is an incredible success!

So, I read this book as part of my pre-Hugo drowning in novels of science-fiction and fantasy, figuring that the rumored supernatural elements move the story from magical realism to fantasy. It’s the same fertile ground mined by two other favorites: Rebecca Roanhorse and Silvia Moreno-Garcia. Of course it has also been well-explored by others, like Ana Castillo in So Far From God, and it is limitless.

Because I take my Hugo vote way too seriously (as I do all my votes), I wanted to guarantee I didn’t miss out on some worthy story, and the book had a great buzz. The Only Good Indians deserves its reputation. It is very scary, but it also great literary fiction, developing characters well and illuminating aspects of contemporary tribal experience that are not often explored.

Nevertheless, I did not nominate it for the Hugo Award, because 2020, which was a pretty trashy year with the pandemic, delivered an unexpected number (for me) of great sff stories. These are the novels I voted for the Hugo Award out of the dozen or so I read:

  • Mexican Gothic; Silvia Moreno-Garcia
  • Harrow the Ninth; Tamsyn Muir
  • Black Sun; Rebecca Roanhorse
  • The City We Became; N.K. Jemisin
  • The Invisible Life of Addie LaRue; V.E. Schwab

I will discuss these and others in further editions of this series.